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When i die i'll go to hell because i'm worthless.
When i die i'll go to hell because no-one cares.
When i die i'll go to hell because i swear to much.
When i die i'll go to hell because i am no good.
When i die i'll go to hell because i am weak.
When i die oh when i die the ones i love will go to heaven why do i wait why don't i die.
©2005-2009 ~Tenchi-Gutsu
:icontenchi-gutsu:

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this is a poem that sums up how i feel right now i originally posted it as a journal but now its a deviation

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:iconbunnysmut:
hmmmm....you can do better than this as a person. you are better than this.

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As little as possible.
:icontenchi-gutsu:
like u know me that well

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Don't follow me, I may not wish to lead. Don't lead me, I may not wish to follow. Just walk beside me, and be my friend?
:iconbunnysmut:
if you want to die so eagerly tell her that

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As little as possible.
:icontenchi-gutsu:
its not that bunnysmut it just seems nothing goes right for me lately

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Don't follow me, I may not wish to lead. Don't lead me, I may not wish to follow. Just walk beside me, and be my friend?
:iconbunnysmut:
i know its tough sweety, life is tough, but you will only get stronger as long as you hold your head up high!

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As little as possible.
:iconmaryblackheart:
babes u dont deserve 2 die nobody does but only in their own time..i love the poem it touched me..
and it makes me feel like ur trapped between four walls of sadness and under a purple cloud of rage, and pain..but my friend these walls can easily break..and the purple clouds can just walk away by just making sure how 2 rectify ur mistake if any is occured ..and make sure its not 4 others its 4 u cuz ur the priority..and make ur everyday goal that 2morrow would be a better day than yesterday..and remeber everything happens 4 a reason ..just have patience ..believe in God and keep ur head high, u deserve to live happily... theres a no way that tenchi-gutsu would die like this not now not ever ...

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sing to life, and to its tragic beauty.
:iconoukan:
that's sad and yet depressing. Don't think that way ever!
You know that we all care about you.:hug:

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Space..space..space!

My spirit wanders around, who knows where I am! Most of all, I offer "Love & Peace!"^_^

MMmmmm...pocky!
:iconspiritfox09:
It's a good peom but don't you ever think that way again Tenchi-Gutsu!! You know we love you!!! :glomp:

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"Each day's a gift and not a given right.... What's worth the prize is always worth the fight..."
:iconpureprincess:
daniel if u think like that and say it again ill keep the ipod to myself! oh yes i can do that! mwahahahaha :hug:

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